I started Monday’s meeting in the same way I started the
previous meeting, by addressing the last set of quotation responses. The quotation responses were generally
of a very high quality and I complimented the group for making very shrewd and
perceptive observations. I
reminded the group that the next step is to take these observations and
synthesize them into more comprehensive assertions about what is going on in
the text. In other words, what do
all of these things add up to?
When you consider all of the things you are observing, what patterns do
you see, and why do these patterns matter – not just to the book, but to
humanity in general? Don’t be
afraid to make bold assertions about these things. You do not need to do it in every response, but push
yourself to arrive at these assertions occasionally. Also, push yourself to be resourceful with the book. Don’t just focus on the quotation in
front of you every time; allow yourself to access other parts of the book that
relate to the quotation. This shows
that you think in a fluid way and that you have some familiarity with the text.
After discussing the responses, we briefly took notes on a
few phases of literary criticism.
The intent was to get at what the AP exam values as far as your critical
writing style goes. The AP tends
to value writing that resembles the New Critical style of literary criticism,
so we talked briefly about New Criticism as opposed to Post-Modernism /
Post-Structuralism. In simplified
terms, New Criticism tends to treat a piece of literature as a force unto
itself which can be appreciated fully without any access to information about
its historical conditions, the author’s biography, or any other specialized
angle of inquiry. It puts an
emphasis on textual structure, tension inherent in the text, and relationships
between elements in the text.
Post-Modernism, on the other hand, tends to see the text as porous, and
the act of interpretation depends as much upon the interpreter’s lens as it
does the text itself. I briefly mentioned
some of these “lenses” as possible areas of interest for students later in the
year, but recommended looking up New Criticism as a mode of writing for the AP
exam itself.
As for the second half of Invisible Man, students found the book had become increasingly
surreal as it went on, and cited a number of scenes and episodes that were
either very hard to reconcile with the rest of the book or simply made students
uncomfortable. The “rape” scene
concerned many students, and this led us to note that the role of women in the
book was quite complicated.
However, at one point we tried to contextualize the rape scene as part
of a larger theme concerning role-playing: characters in the novel invariably
expect the Invisible Man to play a preconceived role, and become very disturbed
when he doesn’t conform, even if the role is a rapist or thief. We explored other major motifs as well:
the preponderance of eyes (“pain-sharpened” or just falling out), the legacy of
slavery and the links of chain, issues of discipline and subordination, the
creation of new selves and new roles, and the idea of being a “mechanized” or
inanimate human being. The
students asked some shrewd questions as well: did Norton recognize The Invisible
Man at the station and pretend not to?
How reliable is the narrator? Why does the Invisible Man never mention
his family, besides the grandfather?
And I asked: why did the Invisible Man leave Mary for the
Brotherhood? Students offered very
thoughtful responses to these questions, which I will leave open for you if you
will be responding in the comment section below.
Because of time constraints, I need to schedule the next
meeting for Tuesday, August 27th. The book this time is Jean Rhys’ Wide Sargasso Sea, which will be a nice transition into Jane Eyre
during the school year. The
assignment is the same as the previous two assignments for Invisible Man, only
for the longer response, please choose a passage in which the author uses style
or technique in a way that is both unique to this book and also reveals
something meaningful about the book as a whole. This particular book boasts a lot of narrative shifts and
unusual stylistic choices, which should make it easy for you to find a good
passage. Come to the next meeting
ready to say a few words about what you think makes your passage work and what
it reveals.
For those who couldn't come, please remember that you have to post a comment in the comment box. See previous posts for details.
Thanks again to everyone who came to the meeting and to those
who wrote to me. See you next
time. Mr. Telles.
If you glance back at the intro, I mean the one that begins the book, we know it is set at the end as well (plot-wise just prior to the epilogue) and already the amount of phantasmagoria in itself is unreal. Also, though this detail would've escaped me had i not read the back cover before beginning the book, the protagonist becomes insane at the end. So it is not so much a coming-of-age story as it is its opposite-whatever that is. Insomuch as the confusion the intro impresses us with goes it does not resolve anything. In fact, the protagonist's life seems to be over (socially) as far as i can tell. It is rather a depressing ending, which is suitable i guess because the whole story was depressing and dark. Just like racial issues of the 60s.
ReplyDeleteThanks Seikey I never would have realized his change in mentality! I feel like I need to re-read it now..
DeleteCharacters in the novel only see the Invisible Man as who they want him to be or need him to be for their life story to continue in the way they are envisioning it. We all stick to the status quo and our daily life schedules because we are comfortable. Even if we are the kind of person who complains constantly about his job, house, friends, etc., we do not want to break out of the mold because we are not familiar with anything else. Jumping into the deep unknown is scary because no one wants to fail. However, the narrator is invisible because people are blind to others and because he has accepted the role of being the invisible, malleable man. He is comfortable, and like I said in my last post, scared to jump off his given path. He has never really looked at other people with his eyes and feelings, like everyone else, because there is never the need and because he has no idea what he may find.
ReplyDeleteAlong with not mentioning family, The Invisible Man also never speaks of friends or relationships. He runs from Mary, and on the two instances that the protagonist does have a companion, things become grotesque. This individualism can be attributed to his belief that people only see you how they want to see you. The Invisible Man pushes people away out of fear; he does not want to be manipulated. This, of course, is exactly what happens when he becomes part of the Brotherhood. During this time, however, the Invisible Man was a totally different person: he had a fake name and learned beliefs. Until the end of the book, the Invisible Man thought that this was the way to be: do not allow anyone to use or change you and you will be safe. What he learns, however, is that change is not necessarily a bad thing. Sure, people will make you out to be different based on how they want to view you, and they may also use you just to help themselves, but it is a cycle of people pushing and pulling that really keeps the human race progressive.
ReplyDeleteTo be honest, towards the end of the book I sort of became confused. What I thought the Invisible Man was, was not really that at all. His personality changed throughout the book, and became more emotional towards the end. I guess the Invisible Man actually wanted to stay somewhat invisible. As the story carried on, his appearance was easier to spot, and he actually took on the challenge of becoming known. By involving himself with others, only problems arose. In the end he ran away and hid. As the topic of family comes up, I believe his grandfather was one of the only people that could see something inside him no one else could see, not even the Invisible Man himself. By giving up a little piece of what he knew gave the reader a little inside scoop. By hiding the rest of the truth about his family, he stayed a mystery. As I said before, as his life carried on I think he realized that he wanted to stay invisible, since there was never really a great amount of effort shown. Sure, he entered into the Brotherhood and became one of them, but one of them was not him. On the outside it seemed as if the Invisible Man was hurting and he felt indeed invisible. I think on the inside he was confused as most people are. He didn't know who he was. In order to be seen, you have to believe. In the end he steered away, but no one knows for sure where he will end up next; I don't think he does either.
ReplyDeleteAs the book went on, I became confused as to who the narrator really was. I felt more comfortable in the beginning than I did at the end with the characterization and plot of the book. The more interactions he has, the more issues came up in society and his life. So, is he really just trying to stay invisible or is he unaware of it? Does he even know who he is? As his identity changes throughout the book and his life swirls around him, I think he becomes more confused then ever. This may be why the end of the book is more confusing then the beginning. All in all, the narrator has a complex identity, if he has one at all.
ReplyDeleteI was much more appreciative of the second half of the book then I was of the first half. In the first 15 chapters, the narrator struck me as naïve, frustrating, and slightly irritating. While he did end up going slightly insane near the end of the book, I felt he matured greatly. He didn’t have a good grasp on the organization he was a part of anyways but when he came to realize this, it seemed to push him over the edge quite a bit. This growth also comes with him pushing off his old life and taking on a new identity and persona. But it always comes back to him and pieces. Someone will remind him of his grandfather, he’ll think of his parents or about how ignorant he was before he came to New York City, but one way or another it is reminisced. His forced persona is one of the reasons that it was so easy for him to digress to his invisible life as it was in the beginning of the book. His development was much to rushed and he lacked any actual natural growth.
ReplyDeleteThe second half of the book contained a lot of ideas about rebirth. The narrator seemed to have a few rebirths and to talk about similar ideas throughout the section. This seemed to put a more hopeful spin on the dreary tone that carries throughout the book. I was thoroughly disturbed by the riot scene and the hanging mannequins. It seemed dark, even for this book. the ending left things very open, something I appreciated because it allowed us as the readers to decide what we will about the final rebirth of the invisible man
ReplyDeleteThe second half of Invisible Man for me seemed to drag on. While the first half seemed more spontaneous with very different plot twists occurring, the second half just seemed to focus on one problem: the brotherhood, and revolved around that idea for the most part. It seemed to lose a lot of the excitement which I appreciated about the first half of the book. I did notice a lot of changes in the narrator as the book continued. He gained more confidence after moving north to the city. At first he was scared to give a speech at the fight in the first chapter, but as the book continued he willingly stood up for what he believed and fought for peoples rights by voluntarily by giving a speech on the streets on Harlem. Overall the book was enjoyable and touched on many ideas and issues which society still has today.
ReplyDeleteThe second half of Invisible Man for me seemed to drag on. While the first half seemed more spontaneous with very different plot twists occurring, the second half just seemed to focus on one problem: the brotherhood, and revolved around that idea for the most part. It seemed to lose a lot of the excitement which I appreciated about the first half of the book. I did notice a lot of changes in the narrator as the book continued. He gained more confidence after moving north to the city. At first he was scared to give a speech at the fight in the first chapter, but as the book continued he willingly stood up for what he believed and fought for peoples rights by voluntarily by giving a speech on the streets on Harlem. Overall the book was enjoyable and touched on many ideas and issues which society still has today.
ReplyDeleteTowards the second half of Invisible Man I found myself getting bored with what I was reading and finding myself constantly re-reading pages. It was like the story had meshed into one big blurb and for some reason I became extremely confused. However the ending chapter was one that I found the most interesting. All along I could find myself relating to the Invisible Man trying to find his true identity, but facing hardships of reality tends to take a toll on some goals. The Invisible Man went from a very confused lost "boy" to a more developed young man finding his way in the world. I enjoyed reading about his reaching out to interact with others, and trying to make himself known but it seemed as if whenever I started to pick up what was happening, I was then confused once again. I liked how the ending ended, it added a bit of light to a more darker story and gave me a hopeful feeling for those who appear lost in the world trying to find themselves.
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